That big gap in the goal posts is not so big when flying FPV huh.

Some of those turns are starting to look good now.
You might find that those last little wobbles you are getting are caused by the FC trying to level the craft every time you let the stick centre.
You may not be able to tune that out, flying rate may be the only solution.

I just had a thought about your landings.
If you turn your quad so you can see your shadow, you may be better able to judge your decent.
As long as the sun is not directly overhead.
